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No light, No light, in your bright blue eyes...

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So I'm kinda proud of Zoey in this...Idk why xD
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Okay, idk if this is a chibi human style or not, so I'll just critique it like it is, okay? ;w; Sorry if I mess up a few things, I barely critique on anything.

Okay, here I go ;w;

I can definitely sense the emotion between these characters. And your shading style is amazing and pretty accurate in my eyes. The arms are at an accurate-ish length for a chibi style.
However, there are a few anatomy mistakes I have to point out:


For Zoey's left leg (I'm guessing that Zoey's the girl xD, and it's our left, her right), part of it would still be showing, but just at a different angle. I don't think it would be completely hidden behind the right leg. Also, I kinda think Zoey's ear is too high up her face. They should be at least between the eyes and the nose.

Again, sorry if I made any mistakes ;w;. Please note that I'm still practicing human anatomy and I might not be accurate. Well, gotta dash off *u*
See ya, Sunny owo